sometimes you want to say so much and cover all your bases, but in doing so you say too much and the reader is lost and starts to skim - make each word count and once you write it rewrite it and make it half as long
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sometimes you want to say so much and cover all your bases, but in doing so you say too much and the reader is lost and starts to skim - make each word count and once you write it rewrite it and make it half as long