Reva, I was inspired by your willingness, as someone so young, to listen (which seems to be listening to yourself) to your characters and let them drive the story. This careful reflection has clearly taught you the importance of an inner life and how valuable emotions are in teaching us what is important to us.
The gift your mom gave you, by not quickly buying another book, is priceless. Happy writing!
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The gift your mom gave you, by not quickly buying another book, is priceless. Happy writing!